Update for Nov 12, 2007: A Werewolf Story ~ Page 43

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Title: A Werewolf Story ~ Page 43
Date: November 11, 2007
NOTES: I wanted to convey the actual phone conversation between Guinness and Claire without words since it would have been a rehash of the same information from the last two pages. Overall, I like the way the page turned out, but the final panel of Guinness headed out of his loft could have been more dynamic.
Edit: I fixed a spelling error in the first word bubble, added a slight yellow tint to the first five panels to make them look a little warmer, and fixed the rain in the last panel. I accidentally left it below the line art in the first version and it looked a little off.
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